This week, we continue to add delicious rhetorical devices to your prose spice shelf.
Asyndeton omits conjunctions and speeds up the sentence
using three or four beats.
Dick ran, laughing, hysterical, howling
from the library.
Balance offers two propositions of equal value joined
by a comma or semicolon. The second half mirrors the first half but changes a
few words.
Dick asked not what Jane could do for him1,
but what he could do for her2.
Chiasmus repeats a sentence or clause but reverses the
order in the second half.
When the water gets rough, the rough get in
the water.
Chronicity moves the sentence backward or forward in time
using connectors such as: after, before,
during and until.
Before
Dick would agree to enter the library, before he would agree to read the
book, he insisted that Jane go home.
Conduplicato repeats a key word from the base clause to
start the next sentence or clause.
Dick was hard to love, hard to
hate.
Consecutive clauses reveal a series of actions or
thoughts.
Dick ran through the hall1, up the
stairs2, skidding around the corner3, breaking into the
library4 in time to hear Jane scream.
Epanelepsis repeats the same word or phrase at the
beginning and end of a clause or sentence.
Day
followed day, week followed week, and Jane still had no
answer.
Epistrophe repeats the same word or phrase at the end of
successive phrases, clauses, or sentences. It carries emotion.
Jane charmed him, confused him,
and consumed him.
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