Clichés are overused metaphors and often employ the words like and as.
Agents and editors hate clichés. However, clichés are so deeply imbedded in our
language, we don't know we are using them. Personally, I applaud all those
creative people who came up with the phrases that give our language its biting
wit, sappy compliments, colorful swear words, and delightful put downs. Our
world would be boring without such gems as:
Dead as a doornail
Like a cat on a hot tin roof
Hot as snot
Sure as shootin'
Detractors
call clichés predictable, annoying, a symptom of lazy writing, and bordering on
purple prose. The main concern is cliché abuse.
The
key to using clichés well is to use them sparingly and twist them to make
them original. They can be placed strategically to add a comic punch or to
define a single character, not the entire cast.
Cliché: Dick won’t rock the
boat.
Twist: Dick won’t rock the
rescue dinghy.
Cliché: Not for all the tea
in China.
Twist: Not for all the
fortune cookies in China.
There
are too many clichés to list them all. Some are so ingrained in our language,
it would sound stilted to avoid them. Make artistic choices.
REVISION TIPS
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Turn on the Clichés,
Colloquialisms, and Jargon option in the toolbox. They will be marked
for you. As you read through your draft, decide which to keep and which to
kill. Have you used the cliché intentionally?
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Can you twist it or make it fresh?
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Have you committed cliché abuse? Should you trim them?
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Does the cliché fit the time and place?
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Does the cliché fit the background and personality of the character uttering
it?
For a list of some common clichés and other revision layers, pick up a copy of:
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