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The Importance of Setting

Setting is a character. It can be a friend, foe, or antagonist. It lives and breathes. It can set the tone and atmosphere. It can create obstacles or remove them. It defines genres.

There are a number of ways to approach the setting for your book. Contemporary settings and real locations are probably the easiest, but that does not let you off the hook when it comes to research.

1.  You can use a real place.

This requires researching the place in question. You can use Google maps as a start. You can now go to Streetview and "walk" along the boulevard. You can visit the town if possible. If you can't visit, you need to thoroughly research the place to get the feel for how the people think, operate, dress, speak, and move about. The pitfall is using what I call "cultural shorthand" to describe it. People who don't live there won't know what Bob's diner looks like or where the Louvre is. So it's important to describe the place well. Even if you pick a famous locale, describe it as if you are seeing it for the first time. If you have never been there, you will have to use your imagination to fill in the details of how it looks, feels, smells, tastes, and sounds. You can research books and travel blogs or blogs written by residents of the  place in question. You could consult their social media pages. If it is set in the past, see if you can find books written about the era, newspaper articles, or local historical societies. If it is so far in the past you can't find anything, you will have to make it up as best as you can. With Mythikas Island I set it in 3500 BCE  on the Greek island Rhodes. It was impressive the amount of information about the topography, weather, moon phases, flora, and fauna I located. I found the beliefs, science, fabrics, jewels, weapons, etc. too.

2. You can use a real place and change the name.

The fun here is you get to name it Made-Up Town and change it up. Not all small towns or big cities are the same. You still need to invent the details. If you pick an existing town, you can rename all the businesses and streets and redecorate the town to your taste. The buildings can be clapboard or brick. The streets can be poorly paved or cobblestones. There can be derelict zombie infested malls or high-speed robocabs. The streets can have gaslights. The countryside can have quaint cottages. If you are thinly disguising the town where you live, others might recognize it. They will feel very clever.

3. You can create a new town, state, or country inside a real place.

Create a location that is in an existing place but apart from it. Most British cozy series invent areas of England and police departments. You should do some research into the closest places to get a feel for the area, but you can make it look and operate any way you like. Adapting an existing area is a little easier because you can research the topography, weather, access to airports, ports, perhaps beaches, lakes, police procedures for a mystery, etc. Use whatever you need for your plot and invent the rest.

4. You can keep it vague.

Some writers like to keep all descriptions vague so the reader can insert their own ideas. I personally hate that method. I like rich detail. I don't need to know the name of every plant. When writers don't describe their main characters or the setting, which I consider an important character, it feels empty and unsatisfying. Some readers don't mind. There are arguments for both sides.

5. Create your own world from scratch.

Placing it in the fantasy or sci-fi realm is a ton of work. You have to invent who they are, what their world looks like, feels like, and tastes like. You have to invent the government, commerce, travel, morals, religions, and languages. What do they eat? What resources do they have access to? How do they obtain food, water, shelter, and clothing? Time intensive, yes, but also a lot of fun. Let your imagination run wild.

The type of setting you choose affects the genre and sub-genre of your book. Readers may be drawn to historical romance or prefer gritty urban fantasy. They may be turned off by certain eras like the specific wars. Some readers scoop up anything set in a quaint English village or a protagonist running a bookstore. 

Setting can also provide promotion and marketing tie-ins. If you feature a city or town, local book stores may be willing to host a book signing, perhaps sell the book in their bookstore. If your beach read features a specific tropical hot spot, you could set up book signings there and write the vacation off as a business expense. Don't be shy about approaching local stores to see if they will feature your book. Many Barnes & Noble stores have a "local" author shelf. I have seen local author kiosks in grocery stores. For most book stores, returnable status is a factor, but they may still be willing to sell a few on consignment. In some tourist spots, books set there sell like hot cakes no matter how they are published.

Choose the setting that works best for your story. Do you need an ominous city, a remote island, or a tropical paradise? Do you need small town conflict or gritty urban crimes? Setting is part of your pitch and can be referenced on your cover. Always mention the setting (where and when) in your book description. It matters.

For further tips and reading check out these posts.

Mastering Setting, making the most of your setting.

Mastering Worldbuilding tools to craft a brand new world or examine an existing one

If you would like a paper version of the Build A World Workbook, you can pick it up here:

Build A World Workbook on Amazon. 

There is also an ebook version: 

Build A World Workbook on Amazon

Writing Conferences Dates To Be Announced

 Whether a one day session, one week conference, or a month-long writing workshop, writing related events are a good way to commune with other writers. They are opportunities to network and get your name out there. In some instances, you can meet and mingle with editors and agents. Some offer critiques or pitching sessions. Nowhere will you find a higher concentration of introverts enjoying each other's company. Local conferences are a good place to meet potential critique groups or recruit members. Note that information for this list is accurate as to what was available in December 2023. Dates and formats may change. Some events continue to be virtual, which allows for a wider audience and lower costs. Others also offer online resources that were presented at conferences past.

Some are free. Some require a fee. Some are more social than others. Many are for new writers, but a few dig deep into craft. You should choose an event that speaks to your needs and desires.

Also keep in mind that some of these organizations offer year-round events, critique opportunities, groups to join, etc. You may find your tribe.

Alaska Writers Guild Conference. Check site for updated information on the 2024 event. The 2023 event was September 29-30 at Rasmuson Hall, University of Alaska in Anchorage. https://www.alaskawritersguild.com/

Annual Digital Author and Indie Publishing Writers Conference TBA http://wcwriters.com/aglawc/index.html

Boldface Conference for Emerging Writers, University of Houston, Texas details to be announced. 2023 was in May. http://boldfaceconference.com/

BookCon in Midtown Manhattan, check their site for updates regarding the 2024 event. http://www.thebookcon.com/

Book Lovers Convention,TBA https://www.bookloverscon.com/

Blue Ridge Writers Conference in Blue Ridge Georgia.https://www.blueridgewritersconference.com/

Broadleaf Writers Conference Decatur Library, Decatur, Georgia. Dates TBA http://broadleafwriters.com/

California Crime Writers Conference TBA Hilton Los Angeles Culver City, California https://ccwconference.org/

Cape Cod Writers Center Conference TBA Massachusetts https://capecodwriterscenter.org/

Castle Rock Writers' Conference, Castle Rock, Colorado.  To be announced. Check their site for updates. The 2023 event was end of September. http://castlerockwriters.com/

Desert Nights, Rising Stars Writers Conference TBA has multiple events at Arizona State https://piper.asu.edu/conference

Door County Young Writers Conference has not announced the date for the in-person event at Sturgeon Bay High School. Check their site for other online classes and events throughout the year. https://writeondoorcounty.org/

Fine Arts Residency Conference Pacific University campus, Forest Grove, Oregon. The ten-day residency takes place twice a year and is open for registration. Dates TBA. There are other workshops available as well. https://www.pacificu.edu/masters-fine-arts-writing/residency-writers-conference

Hampton Roads Writers holds events throughout the year. Check their site for schedule and details. The 2023 Conference was in November. http://hamptonroadswriters.org/

Highlights Foundation holds classes and virtual workshops throughout the year, live and virtual events. Visit their site for details. https://www.highlightsfoundation.org/upcoming-workshops/

Historical Romance Retreat TBA  in San Diego, California. https://www.historicalromanceretreat.com/

Jackson Hole Writer’s Conference TBA Jackson Hole Center for the Arts, Jackson Hole, Wyoming offers monthly workshops in addition to the conference http://jacksonholewritersconference.com

Juniper Institute for Young Writers, Amherst, Massachusetts. Event is for high school students finishing grades 9, 10, or 11. There are online events. No conference has been announced for 2024. Visit the site for more information. https://www.umass.edu/juniperyoungwriters

Kentucky Christian Writers Conference, Elizabethtown, Kentucky TBA. The 2023 conference was in October. http://www.kychristianwriters.com/

Main Crime Wave Portland, Oregon dates to be announced.

Men of Mystery Conference to be announced. https://www.menofmystery.org/

Napa Valley Writers Conference TBA will be held in Napa California at the Napa campus of Napa Valley College http://www.napawritersconference.org/

North Carolina Writers Conference holds multiple events each year. There will be a spring and summer conference as well as workshops throughout the year. https://www.ncwriters.org/programs-and-services/conferences

Odyssey Fantasy Writing Workshop, Saint Anselm College, Manchester, New Hampshire Odyssey offers three workshops a year and ongoing online resources such as classes, webinars, critiques, podcasts, etc. Check their site for dates. http://www.odysseyworkshop.org/

The Pacific University Residency Writers Conference TBA Forest Grove, Oregon https://www.pacificu.edu/masters-fine-arts-writing/residency-writers-conference

Pennwriters Annual Conference offers multiple online events. No conference data announced yet for 2024. https://pennwriters.org/

PNWA Annual Writer's Conference TBA registrations began in September 2023. https://www.pnwa.org/page/conference

Rochester Writers Conference 16th Annual TBA Held at Oakland Universityhttps://rochesterwriters.com/

Sanibel Writers Conference was held in November in 2023. Dates for 2024 TBA. https://www.fgcu.edu/siwc/

Summer Writing Program at The Capitalocene Naropa University, Boulder. TBA Check their site for updates. https://www.naropa.edu/academics/swp/

Vermont College of Fine Arts Novel Retreat, Vermont College of Fine Arts, Montpelier, Vermont. will be an on-campus retreat. https://vcfa.edu/novel-retreat/

Voices of Our National Conference. Miami, Florida holds several events throughout the year. https://www.vonavoices.org

The Writer’s Digest Annual Conference, New York, NY. To Be Announced. Check site for plans for the 2024 conference. http://writersdigestconference.com/

Writers' League of Texas Agents & Editors Conference, Austin, Texas. Check site for updates on the 2024 summer conference. There are other events throughout the year. https://writersleague.org/programs/summer-writing-retreat/

Writers Studio at UCLA Extension in Westwood Village has been shifted to the summer. Check site for dates. There are other events and opportunities during the year. http://writers.uclaextension.edu/writers-studio/

Writing events are a wonderful way to commune with other book lovers and probably the largest number of introverts in one area at one time. Don't be afraid to try them. I promise no one bites. I think, gives side-eye to Horror Writers.

Crafting the Ending

At the conclusion of your exciting tale, most readers are rooting for a happy ever after ending. They want the bad guy punished, the good guy rewarded, and the lovers to be in love.

Sometimes a tidy ending just isn’t where the story should go. Should you change it to conform or end it the way you feel deep in your gut it should end? Some genres have specific expectations. A Romance should end happily. A Mystery should be solved. Beyond that, the resolution of your story can be a little more creative.

Every story has a central question. Will the protagonist succeed in his overall story goal? There are multiple answers.

1) Yes. Dick succeeds and there is no gray area or hanging questions. The plot is tied up in a neat little bow. He feels good about it. This is an up ending. Readers love up endings.

2) No. Dick fails and feels bad about it. He fought tirelessly, but in the end just couldn’t win. This is a down ending. Readers hate down endings.

3) Yes, but. Dick succeeds at one thing but fails at another. He succeeds but there are ramifications of his success that carry on into the future. He succeeds but at a terrible cost he didn’t calculate. This is a form of up-down ending.

4) No, and further more.  Dick not only fails, but he is further punished or must try again in a sequel. Dick may have been going for the wrong goal and not only does he realize he is wrong, he  must take on a new challenge to make it right.  Dick fails at his goal, and we realize he was the bad guy all along.

5) Yes and No. Dick thinks he has succeeded or failed in his goal but there is a twist ending and he finds the opposite is true.  He can kill monster A only to find out the real monster is B. Dick may win the battle but cause a major war. Dick may succeed but hurt everyone affected.  Dick succeeds at his goal but during the final credit roll, he gets nailed by an oncoming bus. This is another type of up-down ending.

6) Maybe Yes/Maybe No. The ending is left ambiguous. It is never made clear what really happened or how the story ends. The reader is left hanging. They may want to hang you. It is a risky artistic choice.

Whichever ending you choose, your story architecture must support it. The ending must grow organically from the actions and decisions leading up to it. You don’t have to make everyone happy. You just have to leave everyone satisfied.

As always, if you find this information useful, please like and share. 

The four layer method is laid out in Story Building Blocks: The Four Layers of Conflict, available in paperback and e-book if you wish to have a copy with all of the information. The theory information is also available on https://dianahurwitz.com/theory.html.


Writing Conferences January to March 2024

Whether a one day session, one week conference, or a month-long writing workshop, writing related events are a good way to commune with other writers. They are opportunities to network and get your name out there. In some instances, you can meet and mingle with editors and agents. Some offer critiques or pitching sessions. Nowhere will you find a higher concentration of introverts enjoying each other's company. Local conferences are a good place to meet potential critique groups or recruit members. Note that information for this list is accurate as to what was available in December 2023. Dates and formats may change. Some events continue to be virtual, which allows for a wider audience and lower costs. Others also offer online resources that were presented at conferences past.

Some are free. Some require a fee. Some are more social than others. Many are for new writers, but a few dig deep into craft. You should choose an event that speaks to your needs and desires.

 Also keep in mind that some of these organizations offer year-round events, critique opportunities, groups to join, etc. You may find your tribe.

January 7 – 11, 2024 Key West Literary Seminar and Writers' Workshop Program, Key West, Florida http://www.kwls.org/writers_workshops/

January 12 - 15, 2024 Winter Poetry & Prose Getaway at Seaview Hotel, Atlantic City, NJ There are also online events during the year. https://wintergetaway.com/

January 12 - 15, 2024 The Colrain Poetry Intensive online event via Zoom. http://www.colrainpoetry.com/

January 13 - 20, 2024 Annual Writers In Paradise Conference, Eckerd College in St. Petersburg, Florida http://www.writersinparadise.com/

February 2 – 3, 2024 Rhode Island Romance Writers Retreat, in Middletown-Newport, Rhode Island will be an online zoom event. https://www.rirw.org/retreat/

February 3, 2024 Murder in the Magic City, Homewood Library, Birmingham, Alabama is an in-person event. http://www.mmcmysteryconference.com/

February 7 - 10, 2024 Association of Writers and Writing Programs Conference & Bookfair, Kansas City, Missouri https://www.awpwriter.org/awp_conference/

February 8 -10, 2024 Superstars Writing Seminars, Colorado Springs, Colorado. There is a one-day intensive on February 7, 2024 as well. http://superstarswriting.com/

February 9 – 11, 2024 SCBWI Conference New York Hilton Midtown New York https://www.scbwi.org/events

February 15 - 16, 2024 Life, the Universe and Everything Conference Marriott Hotel in Provo, Utah. http://ltue.net/

February 15 – 18, 2024 San Francisco Writers Conference Hyatt Regency in San Francisco will be an in-person event. https://sfwriters.org/

February 15 – 19, 2024 The Savannah Book Festival  https://www.savannahbookfestival.org/

February 16 - 18, 2024 Southern California Writers Conference San Diego, California. http://writersconference.com/sd/

February 19 – 23, 2024 San Miguel Writers' Conference & Literary Festival, Hotel Real de Minas, San Miguel, Mexico https://sanmiguelwritersconference.org/ 

February 22 – 25, 2024 Coastal Magic Convention, Urban Paranormal, Fantasy, & Romance in Daytona Beach http://coastalmagicconvention.com/

February 24, 2024 Amelia Island Book Festival https://www.ameliaislandbookfestival.org/

March 4 – 10, 2024 Breakout Novel Intensive in Hood River Oregon https://www.free-expressions.com/breakout-novel-intensive-hood-river-or

March 7 - 10, 2024 Futurescapes Conference at Utah Valley University will be a virtual event. http://www.futurescapes.ink/

March 9 - 10, 2024 Tucson Festival of Books, Tucson, Arizona, University of Arizona Campus plans an in-person event this year. http://tucsonfestivalofbooks.org/

March 9, 2024 Bay To Ocean Writers Conference at Chesapeake College, Wye Mills, Maryland Writing workshops, craft sessions, readings and more every Thursday night from 7:30-9 PM on Zoom. Free & open to all. https://www.easternshorewriters.org/

March 14 - 17, 2024 New York Pitch has a live event in NYC. https://newyorkpitchconference.com

March 15 - 16, 2024 Mid-South Christian Writers Conference in-person conference at the First Baptist Church in Collierville, Tennessee https://www.midsouthchristianwriters.com/

March 16, 2024 Suffolk Mystery Authors Festival in Suffolk, Virginia https://www.suffolkmysteryauthorsfestival.com/

March 17 – 23, 2024 Sirenland Writer's Conference, https://sirenland.net/

March 19- 24, 2024 Get Away to Write Retreat, New Smyrna Beach, FL. Registration open now. There are other online events during the year. https://murphywriting.com/writing-workshops-retreats/

March 20 – 23, 2024 Wild Seeds Writers Retreat at Medgar Evers College, CUNY in Brooklyn, NY. https://centerforblackliterature.org/

March 20 - 23, 2024 The National Black Writers Conference in Brooklyn, New York. https://centerforblackliterature.org

March 22 - 24, 2024 Chicago Writers Association Conference, Warwick Allerton in Chicago, Illinois https://www.chicagowrites.org/conference

March 23, 2024 Liberty States Fiction Writers Conference at the Hilton Garden Inn, Hamilton, NJ http://www.libertystatesfictionwriters.com/conference/

March 23 - 25, 2024 54th University of North Dakota Writers  https://und.edu/writers-conference/

March 28 – 31, 2024 Norwescon Between Two Worlds SeaTac, Washington, https://www.norwescon.org/

Writing events are a wonderful way to commune with other book lovers and probably the largest number of introverts in one area at one time. Don't be afraid to try them. I promise no one bites. I think, gives side-eye to Horror Writers.

Dressing Up The Skeleton with Subgenres

What if we decided the meteor story worked better as a Romance? We continue with Dick, love interest Sally, and friend/foe Jane and Ted and the meteor and try on different subgenres.

If we select the Romance skeleton, the focus is on Dick meeting, possessing, or losing the object of his affection: Sally. The meteor, Jane, and Ted present antagonistic and interpersonal obstacles to this goal. There are different ways to dress up a romance.

1. You can add the Contemporary Romance jacket. This is defined by the time period. The obstacles to their love occur post World War II to modern day. It is often combined with or related to the term “women’s fiction.”  Most romances are told from the female’s POV, but doesn’t have to be in certain subgenres. Ted wants Sally, or Jane wants Sally. Jealousy and rivalry keep Dick from achieving his goal. The impending meteor strike adds an element of anxiety. At the final turning point, Dick saves the day and wins Sally's heart forever. Or, Sally and/or Jane saves the day if you want to add a feminist touch.

2. If you add the Historical Romance mantle, it means that the obstacles to love occurred prior to World War II and may feature elements of mystery or “damsel in distress.” In this instance, Sally is directly threatened by Jane or Ted while the impending meteor strike provides atmosphere and heightens emotion. We learn a bit about the history of astronomy along the way, but not too much. In the end Sally and Dick live happily ever after.

3. If you choose the Romantic Suspense trench coat, the meteor strike is a Thriller and Suspense subplot. The setting could be contemporary or historical. The couple’s relationship is tested by the race to save the planet. Will they live to love or will the meteor obliterate them? Ted is foiled. Jane is mollified. Dick and Sally live happily ever after.

4. If you select the Paranormal Romance cloak, one or all of your characters could be vampires, werewolves, ghosts, zombies, or witches. The focus is on the romance and the paranormal elements as they attempt to thwart the meteor strike. The different species may have different agendas. In the end, Dick and Sally wind up together, the normal world is saved, and they are happy about it. Except for perhaps Ted. Or Jane. Or Ted and Jane.

5. If you prefer the Science Fiction Romance jumpsuit, the setting becomes the future, perhaps on a remote lunar outpost. A rocket may circumvent the tragedy, taking out the antagonistic Ted along with the meteor, leaving Dick and Sally to love uninterrupted in their space capsule as Jane waves forlornly from the control room.

6. If you adopt the Romantic Fantasy cape, your story will feature dragons, wizards, or fairies working to repel the meteor heading for them, preferably with magic. Perhaps the near miss with the meteor was foretold in a prophecy naming Dick The Chosen One, which tests his relationship to Sally. Dick and Sally hold onto their love in the face of fantastic odds.

7. If you assume the Time Travel uniform, some - or all - of the cast must travel through time to solve the meteor strike problem. Perhaps Dick travels to the past, leaving poor Sally in the present. Will their relationship survive the distance? If Dick changes something in the past, will Sally still be in the present anxiously awaiting his return? Or will he return to find her happily (or unhappily) paired with Ted? Perhaps Jane sees her chance with Dick now that Sally is out of the way. But in the end, Dick and Sally are reunited and it feels so good.

8. If you don the Erotic Romance sheet, you’ll need to add steamy sex scenes in specific chapters. The impending meteor and Ted and Jane's interference fuel the fire. As long as they fog up the windows while fighting for their lives, you're good to go. In the end, the meteor misses and Dick and Sally wind up in bed, thankful to have dodged the celestial bullet. Ted and Jane may end up in bed together as well, even though they pretend to hate each other.

Whatever costume you choose, your romance should satisfy the reader by answering the question: “Will they or won’t they?” The answer should be, “Yes.” If your reader is titillated and satiated by the story’s end, they will love you for it.

The four layers method is versatile enough to work with any genre, subgenre, and mixed genres. Breaking the story down into the types of conflict keeps the reader turning pages. A conflict can be as small as trying to get a cup of coffee and being interrupted and diverted along the way to Starbucks or as massive as a space opera with cowboys fighting aliens.

As always, if you find this information useful, please like and share. 

The four layer method is laid out in Story Building Blocks: The Four Layers of Conflict, available in paperback and e-book if you wish to have a copy with all of the information. The theory information is also available on https://dianahurwitz.com/






Stacking The Layers

We have developed our scenes. Now let's look at the best way to arrange them. We began with the premise for a story involving a meteor streaking toward earth, a conflicted scientist, his crumbling marriage, and a coworker who makes his life miserable.  We decided to make the story about Dick, love interest Sally, bossy Jane, jealous Ted, and the meteor streaking toward earth. We have selected the Disaster Thriller format and created at least ten ideas for each layer of conflict. The next step is to decide which order works best for each scene.

We have come up with ten basic ideas for all four layers of conflict. You may find you need to add more scenes to fill in the gaps in the story. You may change your mind about elements of the plot. The point is to have a series of prompts that keeps you working through your rough draft. You can tweak and enrich the draft during the revision layers. Things will come to you as you write that you didn’t think of before. Your characters will come alive and may change the trajectory of your story. That’s expected. What’s important is to avoid getting stuck in the muddy middle.

Let’s layer the scene ideas we've developed in the most logical order.

INCITING EVENT

Internal Conflict 1: Dick and Sally make plans to go on a long-awaited vacation. He gets a call.

External Conflict 1: Dick learns a meteor will strike.

Antagonist Conflict 1: Ted learns there is a meteor headed toward earth. Finally, the world can be destroyed and he doesn’t have to lift a finger. All he has to do is sit back and watch the show.

Interpersonal Conflict 1: Jane meets with Ted to declare her feelings before it is too late. He manipulates her into helping him without telling her the real reason.

Internal Conflict 2: Dick informs Sally that he isn’t retiring after all. He can’t tell her why.

Antagonist Conflict 2: Dick has come up with a plan. Ted vows to make sure it doesn’t work.

Interpersonal Conflict 2: Jane meets with Dick and gives him erroneous data.

External Conflict 2: Dick thinks of a way to stop the meteor while it is still far away. He will nudge it with a satellite.

Interpersonal Conflict 3: General Smith argues that his satellite is too important to be used to adjust the meteor’s trajectory. It could cause more harm than good. They should blow up the meteor.

Internal Conflict 3: Dick and Sally fight about the vacation. Looks like we have to cancel it.

Antagonist Conflict 3: Ted is denied access to the equipment. He has something on one of the ground crew, Bob, and uses that pressure to convince him to tamper with the equipment.  Bob objects, "But we’ll all die.”  Ted threatens, "Do you want to die now or later?"

Interpersonal Conflict 4: Bob tries to tinker with the satellite, but almost gets caught by Jane.

Antagonist Conflict 4: Ted confronts Dick. "Why are you trying to stop the inevitable?"

Interpersonal Conflict 5: General Smith relents and allows the satellite to be used.

External Conflict 3: The satellite crashes into the meteor, but doesn’t change the trajectory.

TURNING POINT ONE

Internal Conflict 4: Sally gives Dick an ultimatum: "I’m tired of waiting. It’s me or the job." Dick replies, "If I don’t do this there won’t be any me or you." Sally asks, “What do you mean?” To which Dick replies, “I can’t tell you.”

External Conflict 4: Dick comes up with plan to divert the meteor with a laser beam.

Antagonist Conflict 5: Dick has come up with a new plan. So Ted must get Bob to tamper with the laser beam.

External Conflict 5: They can’t get the beam close enough from the ground.

Antagonist Conflict 6: Ted calls Sally and tells her Dick and Jane are having an affair.

Internal Conflict 5: Sally accuses Dick of having an affair with Jane at work. Dick is called away.

Interpersonal Conflict 6: Captain Curtis balks at sending the laser to the space station.

External Conflict 6: They send the laser to the space station. The equipment breaks off and is lost in space.

TURNING POINT TWO

Internal Conflict 6: Dick finds Sally packing her bags. Dick says, "Don’t leave. I love you. I’ve always loved you."

She replies, "Then why are you ruining things?" Should he tell? Is it better for her to know or not know that their days are numbered?

Antagonist Conflict 7: Dick confronts Ted. "You had something to do with this." Ted replies, "You’ll never prove it and in a few days it won’t matter anyway."

External Conflict 7: They are back to the drawing board - all seems lost. They enter countdown mode.

Internal Conflict 7: Sally tells Dick that she received a call from Ted and that he said there was no reason for Dick to stay at work. That he is lying to her.

External Conflict 8: Dick comes up with a final plan. It is do or die. They will nuke the meteor.

Antagonist Conflict 8: Ted must find a way to make certain the shuttle doesn’t take off.

Interpersonal Conflict 7: Captain Curtis appeals to his crew. Is anyone willing to go? Captain Curtis decides to go himself.

Internal Conflict 8: Dick tells Sally the truth.

CLIMAX

External Conflict 9: They rev up the shuttle loaded with a lethal payload to intercept the meteor and, despite last minute glitches, the shuttle takes off on a suicide mission.

Antagonist Conflict 9: Ted’s attempts to prevent take off fail.

Interpersonal Conflict 8: Ted and Jane have a show down. Jane can’t believe Ted is so evil.

Internal Conflict 9: Dick and Sally spend the evening together knowing it may be their last.

Interpersonal Conflict 9: Bob rats on Ted.

Interpersonal Conflict 10: Jane and Bob celebrate when the shuttle succeeds.

Antagonist Conflict 10: Ted is led off in handcuffs.

RESOLUTION

External Conflict 10: Their plan succeeds and everyone lives, except the crew of the shuttle.

Interpersonal Conflict 11: General Smith tells Dick to stay. He is too valuable an asset to retire.

Internal Conflict 10: Dick and Sally leave for the airport to go on their vacation.

THE END

Now that we have a basic outline of the plot progression, we can begin our first draft. If massive changes are made along the way, it doesn’t hurt to repeat this exercise at the end. Make a list of each scene and the conflict it addresses. Does it still flow in a logical cause and effect order? 

Next week, we will take a look at how subgenres can affect the story idea.

As always, if you find this information useful, please like and share. 

The four layer method is laid out in Story Building Blocks: The Four Layers of Conflict, available in paperback and e-book if you wish to have a copy with all of the information. The theory information is also available on https://dianahurwitz.com/

Working the Theory Internal Conflict Scenes

 
Internal Conflict scenes introduce and explore the personal dilemma your protagonist struggles with. The verbal camera is focused with a tight spotlight beaming on the protagonist in the background. Use these scenes to reveal the protagonist’s back-story and show him dealing with his guilt, pain, or need which leads up to and is resolved by his point of change.

These conflicts test the protagonist’s character and faith. They make him question who he is and what he does. These are the emotional complications or ties that bind that complicate the overall story problem.

If the love interest has equal weight, you can explore her personal dilemma and point of change in these scenes as well.

Internal conflict scenes can be flashbacks, dreams, and revelations of back-story through memories or an encounter with a friend or foe.

You can show him exhibiting one type of behavior in the beginning and a complete reversal of behavior at the end to show the point of change.

These scenes can reveal the event that happened in the past and how it changed him: he deals with the death of his partner, the loss of his wife, or the child he didn’t save.

The internal conflict often culminates in the section after the climax, where we find out if the protagonist lives happily ever after. It can also culminate just prior to the climax.

That does not mean other characters cannot be in these scenes or that he is not doing anything. It means the verbal camera is zeroed in on his thoughts, feelings, actions, and reactions to the underlying problem that drives him and complicates the overall story problem.

In this Thriller, Dick’s personal dilemma focuses on his marriage. His marriage is on the rocks because he is a workaholic. He had planned to retire but this latest crisis forces him to keep working.

Internal Conflict 1: Dick and Sally make plans to go on a long-awaited vacation. He gets a call.

Internal Conflict 2: Dick informs Sally that he isn’t retiring after all. He can’t tell her why.

Internal Conflict 3: Dick and Sally fight about the vacation. Looks like we’ll have to cancel it.

Internal Conflict 4: Sally gives Dick an ultimatum. “I’m tired of waiting. It’s me or the job.” Dick replies, “If I don’t do this there won’t be any me or you.” Sally asks, “What do you mean?” To which Dick replies, “I can’t tell you.”

Internal Conflict 5: Sally accuses Dick of having an affair with Jane at work. Dick is called away.

Internal Conflict 6: Dick finds Sally packing her bags. He begs, “Don’t leave. I love you. I’ve always loved you.” Sallies feels otherwise, “Then why are you ruining things?” Should he tell? Is it better for her to know or not know that their days might be numbered?

Internal Conflict 7: Sally tells Dick that she received a call from Ted and that he said there was no reason for Dick to stay at work. That he is lying to her.

Internal Conflict 8: Dick tells Sally the truth.

Internal Conflict 9: Dick and Sally spend the evening together knowing it may be their last.

Internal Conflict 10: Dick and Sally leave for the airport to go on their vacation.

In the next section, we will look at the best way to layer our scenes. 

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The four layer method is laid out in Story Building Blocks: The Four Layers of Conflict, available in paperback and e-book if you wish to have a copy with all of the information. The theory information is also available on https://dianahurwitz.com/.