You can have a historical thriller with romantic complications. If it is heavy on romance with the thriller threat as a complication, you market it as romance. If you follow the thriller skeleton, the romance complicates the threat they overcome at the end. The way you layer the genres affects the skeleton dressing, but the central question drives the marketing.
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You can have a historical thriller with romantic complications. If it is heavy on romance with the thriller threat as a complication, you market it as romance. If you follow the thriller skeleton, the romance complicates the threat they overcome at the end. The way you layer the genres affects the skeleton dressing, but the central question drives the marketing.
The Four Layers of Conflict
"Every scene should contain conflict."
This advice led me on a journey to answer the question, “How do you come up with conflict for every scene?”
I developed the four layer method when crafting my YA series Mythikas Island. There were four books. Each character (Diana, Athena, Persephone, and Aphrodite) had their own story arc and acted as the point of view character in their installment of the four book journey. However, there was no one "bad guy" in the book. So how could I make the story tense without a villain or major battle scenes between good and evil?
As I read and studied, I realized there was another way of looking at conflict in a story. There were different types of conflict in the books, movies, and TV shows I dissected. Many did not have a central villain.
The first layer is the External conflict layer which focuses on the central conflict of the story. There are times when the characters make progress toward the goal and times when they fail and have to regroup. These are the big battle scenes or the high tension emotional tipping points. They include the inciting event that starts the story ball rolling and all the key scenes that encompass the twists and turning points and the climactic moment.
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What Is The Central Question Of Your Story?
Every plot hinges on a central question. Posing the question at the beginning of the tale and answering it at the end is sound story architecture. Does that task make your head spin? It shouldn’t. It’s as easy as choosing a story skeleton. Let's look at the fourteen genre's I present in Story Building Blocks.
The Comedy skeleton poses the central question: What do I think and how has this changed it?
The goal is to make your reader laugh while subtly exploring ideas such as ethnicity, relationships, prejudices, social practices, politics, religion, or manners. Any genre can be written with a comic flair. But a true comedy often uses humor to talk about difficult things or express uncomfortable truths.
The Mystery skeleton poses the central question: Who did it and will they catch him? Sometimes it is a "howdunnit."
The answer is usually “yes.” The criminal may escape at the last moment to torment the detective another day, but the case that is the focus of the story is considered solved. Twists where someone other than the detective solves the crime or there wasn’t a crime after all should be rerouted to the Thriller section.
The Road Trip overall story problem is a lesson that needs to be learned or a secret that needs to be revealed. The reader asks: how did this journey change them?
It can be mixed with any other genre with the caveat that two or more people (or a person and animal) are forced into traveling together. They can be trying to reach somewhere or running from something. It isn’t the end of the journey that matters as much as the friction between the characters and the obstacles or stops they overcome along the way.
The Romance skeleton poses the central question: Will they or won’t they end up together?
The answer had better be “yes” or a satisfying equivalent. The girl can find out guy A isn’t what she wanted after all because she found guy B, but this is not the genre for an “I’m okay on my own” ending. That story uses the Literary or Women's Fiction skeleton. Romance readers want passion and fulfillment and are very disappointed if they don’t get it.
The Science Fiction skeleton poses the central question: Will the hero find, change, or stop something in time?
Most fans prefer an "up" ending. They want to believe that we can overcome the challenges to our existence, especially if you plan a sequel. There can be a romance layer here. Science Fiction needs to be rooted in science, nature, and physics. This sets SciFi apart from Fantasy where magic and paranormal events are possible.
The Team Victory story problem is an underdog who needs to win or achieve something. The reader asks will they win?
Usually they do. If not, they should still feel really good about it: almost was good enough. Usually the other coach or team needs to be taught a lesson. These are mostly action and plot-centered tales that make people feel good.
The Thriller & Suspense story problem is a threat to one or many. The reader asks: how will they, and by proxy we, survive the threat?
For an "up" ending, the hero succeeds. If you want a "down" ending, the hero can fail and learn an ugly truth. It can have an up/down ending. Twists often provide an unexpected answer in this genre.
The Western story problem pits man against self, other men, or nature to survive in an unsettled land. The reader asks how will they overcome the difficulty and will they stay or go?
The conflicts weigh the morality and challenges of survival. Part history and part myth, they explore the people who are courageous enough to explore new frontiers and the obstacles they must overcome to do so.
Next week, we will take a look at the four layers of conflict that are the building blocks you can utilize to tell any tale. They help you fill up the murky middles and act as goal posts to keep the story flowing. They offer a lot of latitude for story development as opposed to the two twists and a finale formula.
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Successful Books Begin With A Promise
One of the most important things you as a writer need to decide before you publish or pitch a book is what kind of promise are you making to your reader? When a reader buys a book they want to know what kind of adventure they are settling down to read. Readers find comfort in certain story forms. Just like ordering from a menu, you want what you want, not what someone else thinks it should be.
You can add stars and quotes and reviews all over the cover, but if you haven't told them: come aboard, ride with me, this is the kind of story I want to tell, it's all wasted effort. Your story promise in the one thing that matches the right audience with your product.
Premise is the story idea, such as a tragic love story about ferrets. The premise could feature giant cockroaches invading the planet, a guy meeting the girl of his dreams, a terrorist attack, aliens descend, a murder is committed, an asteroid heads toward earth, a mysterious virus strikes, a heist is planned, a criminal breaks free, a thief needs to be caught, a monster eats Manhattan, or an evil wizard seeks control of Wonderland. Translating the story idea into a novel-length manuscript is where the work begins.
You must pick a promise which ties in to genre.
The term genre is often considered a four-letter word. I say genre is the skeleton key that opens doors instead of a locked door that limits your freedom. Genre plays an important role in storytelling. Ancient man did not sit down at the communal fire and promise to tell a testosterone-filled tale about hunting then launch into a boring account of how he picked nits from his partner’s hair. He would have been justifiably chased into the woods by people armed with clubs.
A premise can combine several ideas such as vampires and a love story. However, you must decide if the focus is going to be on vampires killing off humans thus preventing the lovers from getting together or a Romance about people who happen to be vampires. Right off the bat, the concept of vampires will intrigue some and repel others. That is acceptable. You can’t please everyone. If you want to write a vampire tale, write it. If it is good, there will be an audience. If it is bad, there might be a key element of it that attracts readers anyway.
Romance genre readers may not read Horror and vice versa. Horror stories can have light moments, but Horror fans expect to be frightened from page one. If your story does not deliver on that promise, Horror fans are disappointed. Regency Romance lovers expect a love story set in Regency England. They are offended if you throw in a serial killer.
If a reader is warned beforehand that your story explores the mind of a pedophile, she may pass it by. If the cover tells her she is getting a lighthearted Romance and you toss in a pedophile, she will toss your book in the nearest trash bin. Next time she sees a book written by you, she will shudder and move on. I once sat down to read what was billed as a lighthearted Comedy. There were some funny lines, but the story was about child abuse. I was not amused.
Carefully select the promise you want to make to the reader then keep it. It’s the secret to winning loyal fans.
But my novel is full of lots of things! I see this often. That means you are confused about what your plot really is.
There can be several layers to a story. You can have a Fantasy novel with Romance layer. You can have a Sci-Fi novel set in the old West. You can have a Road Trip that is a serious literary journey or a comedic romp. To help you parse what layers your story has, next week we will look at the importance of the Central Question.
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The Magic of Mark Budman
I just finished the most delightful book by Mark Budman, The Shape-Shifter's Guide to Time Travel.
It is suitable for any age, not just YA. The main character, Rose, travels to the last land of magic in the modern world, fictional Temnova, as an exchange student. She teams up with the Prince of Talents, an advanced shape-shifter named Gavrilo. Together they must go back in time to find an antidote to a drug that suppresses the power to shift. The government has imprisoned the rebel leader and only the antidote can free her and aid their cause to overthrow the totalitarian dictatorship.
The narrative voice makes the characters and setting come alive in a truly divine way. I'd give it six stars if they were available.
Mark Budman is a first-generation immigrant. His fiction has appeared in Catapult, Witness, World Literature Today, Mississippi Review, The London Magazine (UK), McSweeney’s, Painted Bride Quarterly, and elsewhere. He is the author of the novel My Life at First Try, published by Counterpoint, and co-editor of immigration-themed anthologies published by Ooligan Press, Persea, and the University of Chester (UK). One of his short story collections from Livingston Press received a starred review at Kirkus and another received an honorable mention by the Forward Indies 2022 Award.
I had the pleasure of chatting with him about his writing career.
1. What led you to your path as a writer?
As soon as I learned the letters, I began to put them together, and I enjoyed the process so much that I switched to assembling words. The sentences came a little later. By the time I progressed to novels, I immigrated to America and had to learn another language.
2. Are you a plotter, pantser, or combination?
A pantser all the way. That is why my pants need replacement more often than the rest of my wardrobe.
3. How has your background as an immigrant informed your writing?
I answered a bit in #1 but in addition, I consider myself a champion of immigrant fiction and as such I co-edited an immigrant-themed anthology and penned an immigrant-themed novel and two short story collections. All were moderately successful. For someone who learned English at the age of 30.
4. What was your inspiration for The Shape-Shifter’s Guide to Time Travel?
I love fantasy. I love the what if question. I asked myself, what would happen if two people with disparate powers fell and love and combined their powers? What if this would have happened in an oppressive country like my native Soviet Union?
5. Is there anything you would like your readers to take away from this book?
Be young in spirit and adventurous no matter how old you are. And have a good friend. They come in handy. Just come in handy for them as well.
6. You write multiple genres. Do you have a favorite?
Magic realism is my number one love. To combine realistic and surreal in one believable blend. If you make it real, what can be more magical?
7. What is your advice for someone who dreams of writing?
If you have a wish, don't squish it. Work hard and turn the naysayers into admirers.
8.
Do you have a favorite author or two?
Mikhail Bulgakov. I reread his Master and Margarita several times. I imagined myself both of them but not at the same time.
9. What do you like to do when you’re not writing?
Watch fantasy shows. Currently, it's Foundation.
While I believe anyone can learn the craft of writing, some are just born with natural wit and story-weaving capability that sets them apart. Mark Budman is a natural. In addition to devouring the Shape-Shifter's Guide to Time Travel, I have his book The Armor Thieves on my Kindle to read next. Pick up your copies today!
https://www.amazon.com/Shape-Shifters-Guide-Time-Travel-ebook/dp/B09BBY2QYG/r
https://www.amazon.com/Armor-Thieves-Mark-Budman-ebook/dp/B0BN7182CD/
I look forward to reading many more stories from this talented author.
Separating the Writer from the Story
Many writers start off this way. I certainly did. I thought well, this was a unique situation. It was. But it wasn't a good fictional situation. Plot is not situation. Plot is when an inciting incident happens forcing a protagonist to face obstacles to a achieve a goal that has stakes.
The problem is that most beginners attempt to shoehorn a real life situation into a fictional framework. But fiction doesn't work that way. You can't write the first half as autobiography then twist the story into a genre plot. The frame is poor and the glue won't hold.
I am not saying that a writer can't be inspired from things in real life. I am saying there are requirements of a good story and genre expectations. Readers have expectations. They want to know what kind of story they are buying. They want it to meet certain minimum requirements. They really hate bait and switch: when it appears to be one kind of story but turns into another story form they don't like. The biggest problem with this approach is that many readers will walk away unsatisfied. Worse, they will voice their displeasure in a review. They may never give your writing another chance.
So what is the solution? There are multiple options.
1. You can write an autobiography.
Autobiography is a chronological narration of your life. You takes notes about the important bits and cut the boring bits. Think of it as a highlight reel. Hopefully the content is interesting enough that other people want to read about you. It helps if you are famous or have some illustrious career or fascinating hobbies.
https://www.masterclass.com/articles/how-to-write-an-autobiography
2. You can write a memoir.
A memoir is a group of anecdotes related by a theme: love, loss, relationships growing and dying, life beginning and ending. It can feature a series of successes or failures. It can be a tale of overcoming a disease, an addiction, a trauma. Finding your audience depends on the theme.
https://www.masterclass.com/articles/how-to-start-writing-a-memoir
3. You can take elements from your personal narrative and turn it in to a literary drama.
You have to let go of the idea that it is your personal story and make all elements serve the plot.
But it is true! But that's what really happened! It isn't that simple (insert complex explanation).
That has to go. Do you want to write a memoir or a sound fiction story? There's no point twisting yourself into a pretzel to try to make a biographical anecdote fictional. It's just not worth the effort. The story will be weak.
Subgenres include:
● Activist/Cause Literary examines the ramification of a social
topic, politics, religion, man's inhumanity to man.
● Coming of Age Literary examines an adolescent facing adulthood.
● Crime Literary examines the impact and fallout from a crime for the victim, victim's family, the perpetrator, or his family.
● Disease/Death Literary examines the effects of a serious illness or the impact of a death.
● Friendship examines the building, maintenance, or unraveling of a friendship.
● Historical Literary examines the impact of a pivotal point in history on a person and/or their close personal friends and family.
● Legal Literary examines how upholding or contesting the law impacts a person or group of people.
● Malfeasance Literary examines how a corporation or group has damaged people and how their crimes are exposed.
● Multi-Generation Family Saga examines the lives of two or more generations in a family.
● Relationship Literary examines the building, maintenance, or unraveling of any relationship.
● Romantic Literary examines the building, maintenance, or unraveling of a romantic relationship as opposed to the happy-ever-after expectation of the Romance genre.
● Revelation Literary examines the impact of the revelation of a secret or a universal truth.
● Situational Literary peels back the layers of a problem to reveal the cause.
● War Literary explores the cost of war.
4. You can write a story from any other genre.There may be elements that inspire your fiction, but don't let your life story hinder the mechanics of a fictional one.
For more on literary drama and other genres you can put your idea through the story sorter here:
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A Few of My Favorite Things: Anne of Green Gables
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| Anne of Green Gables by Lucy Maud Montgomery |
It is the late 1800s at Green Gables in the fictional town of Avonlea on Prince Edward Island. Geriatric Matthew and Matilda Cuthbert reached a point where they needed help on the farm. So they applied to an orphanage to take on a boy old enough for the job. Instead they get Anne Shirley, a loquacious, dreamy, eleven-year-old girl.
“Isn't it splendid to think of all the
things there are to find out about? It just makes me feel glad to be
alive--it's such an interesting world. It wouldn't be half so interesting if we
know all about everything, would it? There'd be no scope for imagination then,
would there? But am I talking too much? People are always telling me I do.
Would you rather I didn't talk? If you say so I'll stop. I can STOP when I make
up my mind to it, although it's difficult.”
She charms them in to letting her stay. As she struggles to
adjust to life on the farm and school, she proves a challenge. Both grudgingly
fall in love with her and decide to keep her.
“Because when you are imagining, you might as well imagine something
worthwhile.”
The story is told by an omniscient narrator in third person.
The pace is deliberately slow and the tone lighthearted.
“It's been my experience that you can nearly
always enjoy things if you make up your mind firmly that you will.”
The protagonist is quirky and spunky. Her secret weapons are
her imagination and resiliency.
"Nothing could rob her of her
birthright of fancy or her ideal world of dreams."
When her world disappoints, even cuts when Matthew Cuthbert
dies, she embraces her fate with courage and determination.
“Anne always remembered the silvery,
peaceful beauty and fragrant calm of that night. It was the last night before
sorrow touched her life; and no life is ever quite the same again when once
that cold, sanctifying touch has been laid upon it.”
The pull, of course, is the orphan finding a home through
line. The Cuthberts are decent people, though somewhat set in their ways. There
are disapproving neighbors and bullying children to fill in as antagonists, but
no one is overtly evil.
“Life is worth living as long as there's a
laugh in it.”
Montgomery's attention to detail brings the characters and
setting to life.
“Look at that sea, girls--all silver and
shadow and vision of things not seen. We couldn't enjoy its loveliness any more
if we had millions of dollars and ropes of diamonds.”
“It was November--the month of crimson sunsets, parting birds, deep, sad hymns
of the sea, passionate wind-songs in the pines. Anne roamed through the
pineland alleys in the park and, as she said, let that great sweeping wind blow
the fogs out of her soul.”
Anne finds allies in Diana, an opposites attract friendship,
and a budding love interest Gilbert Blythe. Both appreciate Anne for her
pluck and uniqueness.
“Miss Barry was a kindred spirit after
all," Anne confided to Marilla, "You wouldn't think so to look at
her, but she is. . . Kindred spirits are not so scarce as I used to think. It's
splendid to find out there are so many of them in the world.”
The book series has remained popular since its publication in
1908 and has spawned multiple film and television versions and stage
productions.
I loved this series for its warmhearted characters, the
humor, the feisty protagonist, and the thematic struggle to find a home in a
world where you've been abandoned.
The only plot hole would be that someone of her background
would not have the vocabulary and sometimes mature thought processes Anne displays.
“People laugh at me because I use big
words. But if you have big ideas, you have to use big words to express them,
haven't you?”
If there is a weakness, it is perhaps the romanticizing of
life on a farm. It is difficult work with little time for leisure.
Irresponsible acts can prove devastating. People set in their ways are unlikely
to melt so easily, especially when they need the manpower to run the farm.
“We pay a price for everything we get or
take in this world; and although ambitions are well worth having, they are not
to be cheaply won, but exact their dues of work and self-denial, anxiety and
discouragement.”
Still, it is a story of hope and finding one's way and I need
that from time to time: a little light in the darkness.
Forty years on, I still love Anne and enjoy the different
iterations of her story. The most recent adaption is the three season Anne with an E series on Netflix. Sadly it is now over.
I hope she continues to touch hearts for many generations to come.
"Dear old world", she murmured, "you
are very lovely, and I am glad to be alive in you.”
You can pick up a copy of her story here. Or download a Gutenberg ebook or audio book for
free.





