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16 Heroes and Villains: Shelby
16 Heroes and Villains: Joss
In Story Building Blocks II: Crafting Believable Conflict and the Build A Cast Workbook, I introduce sixteen character mannequins or prototypes based on personality types. I track them from cradle to grave and talk about their strengths and weaknesses and how to warp them. I use male or female pronouns based on the percentage of the population that fell in that category, but all mannequins can be anything you make them. The traits discussed are starting points. You can alter their temperaments depending on the purpose they serve. Their traits give them strengths to build on and weaknesses to exploit.
JOSS
As a hero, Joss is an intrepid man of action. His physical risk-taking makes other people slightly nauseated. He makes a great sniper, special forces soldier, or superhero.
As a villain, Joss is deadly to anyone who crosses him or in defense of someone he foolishly believes.
Joss is loyal, despite his better judgment. Just give him a plan and he'll work it. He is a skilled maverick and an expert in his field. He’ll do anything for his close band of brothers. Joss follows the path of least resistance He doesn't need time to prepare and operates alone. He is highly aware of the physical situation, but blind to emotions. He makes keen observations and uses the information when needed. He notes flaws and attempts to correct them.
On the dark side, Joss's rash decisions make him vulnerable to predators and can result in catastrophe. He needs wide personal space and prefers to operate independently. He can drift toward paranoia. He enacts nefarious plans and does not care who it hurts.He is highly territorial and dangerous when crossed. He won't warn before he tears someone apart verbally or physically. He is an unpredictable villain. He thrives on risk and beating the odds and is easily bored.
Joss is rigid when threatened. He suspects people who think or behave differently and assigns them malicious motives. Joss is terse and nonverbal with a dry sense of humor. Some find him thick-skinned and tasteless. He is better at nonverbal expression. He isn't very interested in other people. He keeps his opinion to himself but erupts inappropriately when opposed. If he wants your opinion, he'll ask for it. He tunes out people who attempt to control him. He is rational and analytical but his logic is fuzzy. He doesn’t often share his thoughts. He thinks before he speaks and confides in a trusted few. He ignores sources he does not respect. Joss tells you what he thinks, delivers objective opinions, and is focused on whether information is true or false. He doesn't care if you agree. He doesn't care if you are upset. He focuses on the problem at hand and wants to solve it, not whine about it. He turns cold in the face of emotional outbursts. He can be unpredictable, unstable, and impulsive when pushed. He listens in information gathering mode. He evades answering questions by asking more questions. This frustrates other people when they need a direct answer. He doesn’t feel he owes anyone an explanation and never asks for permission.
Joss blocks out everything but what he believes, which makes his views narrow. He makes impartial decisions quickly and easily. Joss relies on experience and focuses on the details instead of the big picture. He makes impersonal choices regardless of the consequences. All rational options are considered. He prefers to keep his options open and is never quite satisfied with a decision. Procrastination can take the problem out of his hands. Joss is not a crusader. He doesn’t care if he fits in and is never truly invested in a belief system.
Joss can be insubordinate. He ignores structure, rules, and regulations. He is loyal to his band of brothers, but ignores superiors. He is annoyed when interfered with. If rules don't impact him, he doesn't care. He'll go around someone who tries to impede his progress. He won't waste time arguing with them. He will deal with the issue unilaterally.
Joss hates mindless routine, sitting still, reflecting, reading, and idle chit chat. He loves the adrenaline rush. He is spontaneous and flexible and operates on a smaller safety margin than ordinary men. He hates being tied down and ignores schedules. Joss is not a planner, but can work a plan. He is pragmatic. He pushes limits and volunteers to go first. He remains calm under pressure and acts while others debate. Joss doesn't manage people or come up with a battle plan. He follows orders but changes the plan without a second thought if the situation calls for it. He is good in fast changing situations. He focuses on the present, the not past or future, and lives moment to moment. He blocks out distractions to focus. He struggles with multiple courses of action. Just tell him what to do and let him do it. Deadlines are suggestions. When things go wrong, he ruminates over what happened and whose fault it is.
Joss's natural allies are Greer, Kelly, Blair, and Francis. His nemesis is Taylor. He enjoys others like himself. He is drawn to whoever shares his passion of the moment. Joss is an exciting catalyst. He encourages others to embrace his risk-taking hobbies. He has an affinity for sports but also an artistic appreciation. He is tolerant of most people and is valued by friends. He has many different sets of friends, but not intimate friends. He makes day-to-day efforts to keep a friendship going as long as it is interesting. Friends are confused and hurt when he drops them without notice or explanation. He isn’t good with long-term commitment. He won’t tolerate anyone he perceives as boring. He is often found with extroverts because of his leisure activities, but they quickly tire him. He doesn’t have time for the navel-gazing introverts. He avoids confrontation until someone violates a core value then punishes with cutting criticism.
As a hero, Joss is the perfect action hero, spy, renegade soldier, or CIA agent.
As a villain, he is a reckless, relentless sniper or hitman. He won't lead the enemy, though he could by default, but he is a very effective weapon.
Next week we meet Kelly.
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16 Heroes and Villains: Hadley
16 Heroes and Villains: Dallas
In Story Building Blocks II: Crafting Believable Conflict and the Build A Cast Workbook, I introduce sixteen character mannequins or prototypes based on personality types. I track them from cradle to grave and talk about their strengths and weaknesses and how to warp them. I use male or female pronouns based on the percentage of the population that fell in that category, but all mannequins can be anything you make them. The traits discussed are starting points. You can alter their temperaments depending on the purpose they serve. Their traits give them strengths to build on and weaknesses to exploit.
Dallas shuts down in the face of opposition. You can try to persuade or stop her, but she becomes an immovable mountain. It takes a craft adversary to talk her around. She can be hasty and unwise. She can come up with a plan but doesn't stick around to enact it or follow up. She doesn't care if it's done correctly as long as it is done at the last minute and just good enough. Deadlines are suggestions. She takes calculated risks and never does the same thing the same way twice. She rehashes the emotional impact instead of solving the problem. She doesn't care what happened or who was to blame. You can't change it. Move on. She does not fix the messes she makes.
16 Heroes & Villains: Blair
In Story Building Blocks II: Crafting Believable Conflict and the Build A Cast Workbook, I introduce sixteen character mannequins or prototypes based on personality types. I track them from cradle to grave and talk about their strengths and weaknesses and how to warp them. I use male or female pronouns based on the percentage of the population that fell in that category, but all mannequins can be anything you make them. The traits discussed are starting points. You can alter their temperaments depending on the purpose they serve. Their traits give them strengths to build on and weaknesses to exploit.
BLAIR
As a hero, Blair fights for those less fortunate or suffering. She is a social pollinator.
As a villain, Blair is capable of deception and treachery and may lead her followers into danger.
At her best, Blair travels to the beat of a different drum. She embraces the latest fads and trends. She lives in the moment but takes that moment very seriously. She is highly sensitive, artistic, competitive, and introverted. She does not seek acclaim. She is quiet and unassuming. She has deeply held values and doesn’t care if she fits in. She adheres to her own code of conduct. She has firm, if totally unfounded, opinions and is easily influenced. She is persuasive if she believes something is in someone's best interest. She stands up to people who behave badly. She learns through experimenting and may come up with the solution to a problem through accident rather than intention.
At her worst, she isn't interested in leading but could be pushed into it. She'd resent it. She grasps other people's motives and behavior and uses it to manipulate them. She takes risks and hates structure. She never finishes anything. She is not focused or disciplined. She is superficially charming and can draw a crowd. Rules and limitations make her feel dead inside. Blair balks when pushed. She could be subversive and would draw people to follow her based on faulty facts and theories. Blair comes up with wild ideas, but lacks setup and follow through. People follow her but she doesn't care about them. She is aloof and detached and avoids ties. She chafes at restrictions. She is easily bored and stirs up trouble to entertain herself. She is a sore loser.
Anxiety makes her overly critical and cynical. She rejects criticism from others, but is hard on herself. She hears criticism even when it isn't intended. Invasion of her personal space makes her rigid. Blair goes with her hunch. She doesn't analyze. She talks things over with her inner circle. She tells you how she feels, asks for sentiments, and is focused on whether the information is good or bad. She wants you to agree with her and understand her feelings and that she is upset. She does not respect people who lack self-control. She is a good listener, but poor at expression. She lacks insight and her opinions are shallow.
She dismisses people who don't agree with her and shuts down when opposed. She justifies her behavior and finds fault with her accuser. She suppresses negative emotions until she explodes. She chooses only when forced. She'd rather other people make the decisions. She considers every option even when it wastes time. She is paralyzed if presented with a snap decision. She makes emotional decisions. She ignores rules that don't suit her. Blair never plans. She changes course easily and improvises on the fly. She relies on her experience and isn't interested in theorizing. She gets things done at the last minute and just good enough. Deadlines are a suggestion. She rehashes the emotional impact rather than solving the problem. She is more focused on what happened than what could happen. She does not have a balanced view of the truth and blames other people if they point out she is wrong. She plays the victim to avoid blame. She takes criticism and conflict personally. She feels overly responsible for making everyone happy. If someone is having a bad day, it is somehow her fault. She becomes passive aggressive when stressed.
Blair's natural allies are Joss, Shelby, Hadley, and Wynn. Her nemesis is Lee. Blair takes her commitments seriously. She is caring and supportive of her friends’ dreams and aspirations. She hates conflict and feels attacked when confronted. She lets negative impressions build up until the final straw, then she spews venom. Blair needs to be seen and understood. She gets along with most people but is reserved around people she does not know well. She gravitates toward those who share her interests and values.
Blair hurts others through her carelessness. Her friendships are fluid and shallow. She is intensely private. Her friends might be surprised by how strong her opinions are. She defers to others, which creates problems if her friends are unaware that she actually has needs or opinions. She expects the other person to be psychic. She grows resentful when her friends aren’t as attentive to her as she is to them. Blair is slow to warm up, but loves deeply. She gives up on relationships that don’t meet her needs, even though she never stated her needs. She feels overlooked, discounted, and used. Blair needs affection and admiration. If she isn’t praised for being wonderful, she deflates. She is vulnerable and easily hurt. She withdraws when hurt.
As a hero, Blair is unpredictable but willing to go all in when necessary. She will defend her friends and her belief system. She can be a master manipulator inspiring others to do what is needed while no one suspects her.
As a villain, Blair is sheer chaos unleashed. She can be resentful and will turn on someone without warning for reasons they will never understand. She is good at manipulating people which is a problem because she is susceptible to unfounded belief systems. She could be a mysterious but charismatic leader of a cult. She can be the friend that is really an enemy.
Next week, we meet Dallas.